This is a great poem. i enjoyed it

That was really really good, i enjoyed reading it, keep it up!
5/5
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Lovely poem
different from what i've read before
5/5
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amy

This was a very good poem. it flowed so perfectly, i could stop reading it once i had started. the rhyming came to you naturally and didnt seem forced. excellent job. 5/5

I really loved the poem.. i would try to give advise on how to make it better .. but it seems to well put.

~David

That flows really nicely - good work :)

Peace.

Well done, its great
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loved it

'They use their fists and legs to kick
Though none of them have a head'
I'm not really feeling that line but that's only because I don't understand it... But very good poem. You're an excellent writer.

Wow, that is an intense poem, very well worded and overall very well written, I love the way all the colours are in a way personified, that was certainly one of my favourite poems today, you wrote it incredibly well, I especially like the first stanza, the line really hooks you into the poem, wow, well done indeed!

Great work i loved it amazing it really is
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ash

Your poem is really, really good, i've read a poem like this ever, i've motly read love poems and freindship poems because those are the kind I write, but it was really good to read your poems, it really opened my mind to a lot of different things i haven't written about or included in my poetry, good job, one of the best poems i've read. 5/5, i would give you a 10/10 but they don't have it on here.

Awesome poem
^^cindy^^

Heh, I didn't understand what this was about in any way, but I liked it. It was very original, of course I've never read anything like it, and you still made everything good. The format the flow.etc,

Good job, keep up the good work.

I love this poem! Your an exceptianly talented writer. I love how you draw the reader in and paint a picture for them with your words. I also like how you make it to where everybody can find a diffrent meaning or have a diffrent picture in their head.

Miryah

This poem reminds me of a struggle with racism. Nice. I really loved it 5/5