Wow waht a dream nice poem maybe u can ead one of mine 5/5 go fish bowl

What a great dream u had, this poem was an awesome..keep the good job up..joc....

Much love from Jammal!

As I said in the forums: I loved the twists in what seemed a plot and the ending was beautiful!! GREAT work!! This is a BEAUTIFUL picture of a love from a story. :) 5/5

I absolutely love this one!

To find that true love, makes life worth it.

This is a beautiful poem.
I love it!!!!

I agree that this is a very nice poem and I loved the imagery that it created.

What threw me off initially was the mixing of rhymes, the beat and how you sorta switched language in the middle of the poem. It's really hard to explain, but I'll do my best.

I'll read it a couple more times and then I'll send you a message if things are still unclear.

All in all, a great piece of poetry.

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