Your saying that it might not be a good poem, but it is and it has a very deep meaning that has been portrayed through it. kepp up the good work yh, and dont let poeple tell you that your work is not good, its always good in the hands that wrote it and the mind that conjured it.

You may thinkk that this isnt a good poem but it is, it has depth and emotions..

BTW thanx for commenting on my poem

Kazza

Hey that was really good for a first poem,
dont give up on love, its out there.
if u need n e help just ask nd ill be happy to help u.