Thx Harley for your comment on my poem.

Your words are so REAL in this poem.. and astonishing true..

Wow, mind bender I liked it a lot. check the spelling though, you have some errors. Over all... wonderful piece.

Wow very well spoken and wrote i liked it alot and thanks for the comment keep up the good work

Very well written. Thx for the comment. Eli is right though you need to check the spelling a little, other than that, I loved it. Great work. Keep writing.

Enspiring!

Really enjoyed reading ya poems.. keep them coming .. thanx for your comment on mine xx

Thnx for the props i liked this poem very well writeen =]

Wow Harley, this is truly magnificant and very well expressed. 5/5

Wow that is def moving and mind bottling...very well written!!