THIS IS AWSOME! I LOVE THIS! IT'S REALLY, Really , really, really really, really, really, (get the point? lol) GOOD! KEEP UP THE AWSOME JOB! 5/5

This is awesome!! really great.. it really express all the hidden emotions.. great job!!

Hey this was a nice poem
it seemed like you were rhyming alittle, but then you werent, which i like because it showed that you were more concerned about the content of the poem and getting the emotion right then trying to think of some stupid rhyme
well done

i would also like to thank you for your comment, not many people read my work so it was really nice to see that someone actually liked my poem