Wow. nice poem. you must really love her.

Beautifully written. i l0ved it. great ch0ice 0f w0rds t0o. thank u f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em! meant al0t

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Hi, harely, thanks for your 5, i have read 5 poems of you i only like this one and i gave you 5 for, you can write very good, as far as i can see, please put always in mind, we are not the only people on this site, what i want say that people doesn't have the time to read all, that is why i do advice you, make your peom very short as it can, if you can see, you will find that you got the best for your short peoms and not or nothing for the long one, second, please put in mind that english is not the mother langues of all the people. once again thanks for your 5

Thanks for the comment and I really enjoyed reading this one..You have talent

I know exactly how u feel gud one

I like it