I reallly like this one, but yea dont do that seriously cuz that really wouldnt be too cool
5/5/5/5/5/5/5/5/5/5/5/5/5 :)
-deion

Great poem..really graphic and detailed i thought. nice work.
>torn -x.x.x-

It wasn't all that bad...not one of my favorites i hope that this never happens..anyway..hit me back..peace