I really like this poem hun, its good - and it doesnt matter if you just started writing recently because thats not wat determines if ur poems r good or not wat determines that is if ur writing from the heart - writing wat u feel - writing wat u think u should b writing about - dont eva stop no matta wat - and dont let anybody criticize ur writing ok!! =)

Destiny

Well for starters...thanks for the comment!!! ...meant alot,so im returning the favour ....nd secondly

if all your work is as good as that,i look forward too reading more ov it!
you write with uniqueness ..and power, its so heartfelt ..and touching! ... its an inspiration ..too read work thats so close too what i feel
keep up the awesome work!
5/5!
- Unity

I really like this poem. it reminds me of someone i once loved. keep up the good work.

*comment my poems please*
Do you live in California?

WOW THiS ONE iS A LOT BETTER THEN ME. LOL. BUT i DiD WRiTE A NEW ONE SO iT`D BE GREAT iF YOU COULD TELL ME WHAT YOU THiNK! iT`S CALLED- JUST LiKE SHE SHOULD.

OH && 5 ALL THE WAYY! x00

Hey, thanks for your comment. I really like your poems, it's nice to see someone writing straight from the heart rather than trying to constrain themselves with a whole bunch of conventions! Great style. 5/5

I love your poems...and yea i feel the same way as you...grr same thing happened...but good luck on everything i looooove your poemssssssss 5/5

OMG! This is exactly how I felt when I met my first true love in 8th grade! Everything you said is exactly wat people said bout me and my boyfriend! But except this part:

"but now,
everything they ever said
means nothing,
because you left
and i`m all alone
just waiting for
another guy
to come along
and break my heart
again"

We are still together and it's been 3 years with some months! I really love this poem! 5555555555555/5
Cindy
If you have time you should check my poems out! Thanks

Heyy i love the last stanza
i always end up with guys who break my hart =[
but keep up the good work=]

&& i also love all of your quotes too =]

love alice
xxxxxxxxxxxx

This sounds like a deeeeep poemmm i loooove it...and if you could do me a favor....check out my newest one...TIMES HAVE CHANGED...thats wat its called...k so yea i loved this poem...and your poems make guys seem like they are terrible people lol which they pretty much are...at least i hope im not but yea some guys can be pretty mean but it seems like you seem to deal with it by writing poems...and your poems are amazing so yea...keep writing plz

Thats cute but sad sorry you had ta go threw that it sux!!

Aww this poem rocks! Its sad though :( and you can feel the heartbreak in the poem :( its his loss!! take care x x x

This is a poem i really relate to

i just went through the same thing..
i love your poems. keep writing!

Hey thank you so much for commenting my poem

i really liked this..
I can really relate to it
sorry you feel that way.
it`ll get better eventually

This is a really good poem. you are an awesome writer. good job, keep it up

I really like this poem omg it is amazing! 5/5 all the way

Wow thats amazing i know exactly that feeling and its amazing how you put it into a poem amazing work =]keep it up
ps i like the way the two verses were kina oppsite but that might just be me lol
xxx

Wow great stuff... you are great in expressing your feeling in language but hope you dnt mind my suggestion this one is great.. but it is great if you put this in a much good form (thats just for me lol) some poets like forms but i understand that were on the new age of writting however this is great...