Comments : Erotic desires

  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    LUSTY!!!!! HOT!!!!! SEXY!!!!!!
    This is not for kids!!!! HAHAHA...... I'm a prude... just kidding!

    This poem really shows your talents as a writer. At first I read it slow, and had to stop in the middle and start all over, and read it slow...At this point I was already in love w/your poem. EXCELLENT imagery Lots of imagery... Don't know why no one has commented on it yet... because it's wonderful..... (shhhh it's because they don't know real poetry!) =) dont' tell anyone I said that.... hahaha... =)