Again awesome work........
less words but deep meaning

Bharti

Awwe, this is a really good poem. KEEEEEP ON WRITING! I'd love to hear more from you. 5/5

Short yet to the point. Excellent for that. Some choice words that added to this piece. Really thought that it had this cool way about it. Short lines that heightened the delivery.
~Faith-less

Great poem. Short but to the point. Keep up the good work, 5/5

Hey its me elli- you have a great poem here! will you read beathless by sarah