I love your poem it awsome! and i know how you fell my ex killed me he broke my heart and he ugh i just know how you feel

Good poem!! but i hope you aren't serious!! you will be able to move on i don't it doesn't seem like it right now but just give it time it will get better!! keep writing!! i know it helps me!!

This is really good .Many young girls know how you must have felt. We all go through it once in awhile but the thing that makes us different from guys is that we know we have the power to love and beloved again. I hope that you find love agin because with it life just seems empty. But you should know that you can do better I'm sure. Good luck with your new life.

~*WoW another awsum poem ur a really great writer keep it up 5/5*~ XoXo
-Crazy

I really like this. I know how you feel. You should read mi poem Escape, cuz it's similar to how you felt in this one. Keep up the good work and keep in mind that you are as strong as you want to be and I know you feel like you have nothing to live for, but you will eventually find that you have nothing to die for either.

This is written so nicely, i realli hope ur not gunna do that, its not worth it, if ur boy just dont c wat an awesome girl u are, then its not worth the pain. 5/5
thanks for the comment!

This so well written; I really like this poem and I enjoy reading it! I really hope you are not gonna do that! It's not worth it! 5555555555/5!
Cindy

This is really good. im goin through this too... hope everything works out for u

K lauren...i felt exactly the same...i broke up with her and she didnt want me back i guess but she changed me! just hold on...everything will work out...and i know it sux hearing that cuz thats the worst thing getting told...well thats how i feel about it but no worries it really will work itself out lol

Great job

incredibly well written and definitly shows maturity way beyond your years

awesome

5/5

AMAZING! I love it

This is such a good poem keep up the good work

Thats really gooD!!!!!!!

Very nice poem! and thanks for the comment!
-nick-

Very nice poem! and thanks for the comment!
-nick-

A really deep poem you express yourself well.

Your poem rox
its really nice and tender~!!
you're a young talented poetess so plz keep it up
Much luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

Aww this is sad..i really like it though..i think i like it so much because i also can relate to this in a way..im adding you to my favorites!

Beautiful work lauren.

Keep it up.

Colin

I love your poems lauren! i love how you write so well. i can never seem to get down what im thinking and feeling and still make sense! LOL. i think it helps to read poems from this site and know that your not alone, others have gone through the same thing and are surviving. this is a really good poem, as are the rest of yours =)
your amazingly gifted