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  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    I love this, it has a great message.
    Color only makes you blind
    If pigment is all that you see
    super powerful, great job. glad to see you're back (tho i didn't really know you). Take care XXXXX
    JL

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Wow, wow, wow, WOW!

    "Color only makes you blind
    If pigment is all that you see"

    That's some powerful lines. I'm still in awe.

    "We're all as innocent as a bloody hand"

    I absolutely love this line! It looks so simple, but it'd took me forever to even come up wityh a line as power as that one.

    I love this poem, makes me wonder what the heck "To Kill A Mocking Bird" is about.

    Glad to have you back, Missy.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    =O
    This was excellent,ma'am.
    I loved your choice of words, complete master peice. I can see why your proud of it. I havn't read the book, But hell I think I will x]
    My favourtie part twas ''We're all as innocent as a bloody hand'' It was really well thought and I really loved it, shall be my new phrase!
    Misshed you loads.x

    Lisaness[pie pie]

  • 18 years ago

    by mkml

    Great poem, fantastic. It has a true meaning and it's just amazing! 5/5

    Keep writing!

    Chelsey