Great write Darien! I love your poetry so much! You can feel the regret, wonderful job!

Wonderfully written my friend! You've created a piece with such meaning. Great stuff!

It's not too late to change,
the way you have become.
There are people who will help,
they will take you back home.
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Great way to end the poem. Loved it again. All your poems are really good, Tehe. Keep writing, And thanks again for the comments =] 5/5

`taleee xx

I liked this poem because of the last stanza
it is so hopeful and positive

How can this not have more comments!!!
Like all your poems, it's fab!
(I'm so running out of adjectives to describe your poems, lol)
I love the message in it.
5/5 as always
*Gem*