I really like this one- made me think twice about that lump of dead rock- killer imagery and well- worded throughout. 5/5

Hmm.. I could feel this poem. Seemed a bit rushed though. I guess I'm too use to verses. However, very good stuff.

Excellent. 5/5

Oh and thanks for sticking up for me in the discussion thing.

Chelsey

Sweet poem dude

I love it. I love it.
Very smart. It touched me. Very good

Love the poem x