WOW. That was really good. I don't normally read or write love poetry but that really snagged my attention. I was just kinda perusing and decided to check this out. Glad i did, congrats on the amazing poem.

Love it! Great job 5/5

- natz x0x

Great write! It took me several times to finally get the right flow out of the poem. My suggestion is to add some punctuations to help the reader to understand it easier... but of course... that's only me. Great write though! 5/5

Took me like 8 tries to find the right...flow i guess you would call it? lol, but it's a really good poem