Great poem, I can relate to it,
And thank you for commenting on one of my poems, I Just had a smally question about what yoA little advice first,
the last verse its suposed to say all and it say al u sayd:

I appreciate getting advice to improve my work, But I didn't really get this one.

x A.

Allsome i so can relate cuz now i realize i dont need my family cuz i could be on my own~
kariina