That is really good and i like it a lot

Awwwww that was beautifull..
Well Done..and perfectly stated
No bad things on this poem
5/5
~TPOMH~

And yet another good poem from you! Man, if only my guys could really see what they can do to us... maybe then they'd understand. 5/5!!!!

*muah*

Woopsies! I said "my guys" and I meant "guys" (hehehe) I was typing too fast and I added an extra word. I'm not a player or anything!