Great Job..Love your rhythm and flow in this one..the best one so far
my suggestion
this would go great in the sadness depression section
5/5
Awesome job
~TPOMH~

Lol u think this is long? *grins* my poems r MASSIVE try locker 49.... most ppl who read it r like... um yea... it was good...but I fell asleep halfway through lol!!! hey great WORK!!!! :O I was pleasently suprised.... fantastic. I mean i didn't like that he broke ur heart AT ALL but the poem was brillient work!!! keep it up hun. *hugs*

ruthie xoxo

I know how you feel!!That is what the only man I turly loved did to me!!This poem was good!!!!!!

Wow, u new to writting or this website cuz this is a really really gd poem. so much feeling gone into it and i agree with u 100% and no exactly how u feel. love songs and poems suck they hurt u and unrequited love hurts eveen more because i dont no. well im here if u ever need to talk and after wt happened today i think that love can go to hell in all ways. but yeah i can relate to this poem so well so keep up the gd work and if u would comment on some of my poems i'd apreciate it. im giving this a 5

That was REALLY good
i know how you feel........kepp it up!
xoxo
Cassie

OMFG! are you my split side? i swear all these poems are as close as they can get to my life, OMG they make me cry soo much BUT IN A GOOD WAY!!! ttyl!

**5/5**
Lolli

Wow i feel so special. =]