I really liked this poem a lot, and how you worded the blood and tears. 5/5. :)

A little advice first,
the last verse its suposed to say all and it say al
that was a great poem
awesome job
definitaly
5/5
dont take anything less

From al the bloody tears I cried..

that is direcrtly from ur poem
and i thoguht it was supose to say ALL not AL
okay?