Comments : Your So Far Away

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    In your second stanza, you didnt rhyme the first line? Or did I miss something? Anyawy, I loved your last two lines.
    'I wait at your locker to tell you I can't this anymore
    I quietly walk out the door' or something along those lies. COMPLETE HOTNEEEEEEEEESS!!!!! lol