Great work Luke... Very warm and cuddly :)

Lol, this reminds me of when my girlfriend kisses me. mmm how I love it. Awesome stuff!! :)

Great poem makes anyone that reads it smile...good work!

How cute!! i love it!! great job!! i'm happy for you!! dont let her go!!! keep writing i like your style!! comment back if you would!

Excellent loving the poems!!!! keep strong!!! xx keep writing xxxx

This was an exceptional poem. If you wrote this about someone special she should be proud.

Your So special..
Those lips too..
I'd give it all..
Just to kiss you..

These lines really made me think of my man...thispoem really created wicked imagery!!! 5/5

This was an exceptional poem. If you wrote this about someone special she should be proud.

Your So special..
Those lips too..
I'd give it all..
Just to kiss you..

These lines really made me think of my man...thispoem really created wicked imagery!!! 5/5

Cute keep it up

Haha this poem is awsome and sweet
i love it it rocks!!

This is such a sweet poem

Very sweet & innocent Luke. Truly enjoyed
Take care!