Pffft.. You said mine were good? I thought this was beautiful. It was written from the only place that counts. The heart! Great job.. sheez and you said i was good.. (laughs). You're the one who is good, i loved it.

Mollsy,
ur peoms are great and i cant beileve you ever douted that! you rock at writing! lol and i know they come from ecperiance and i hope you dont ever have to feel like that ever again!
xoxo ~maggie

Hey same to you keep writing, good job!!! i love all of em! props

Is this how you feel???

I use to but now im over him. i found somone new who treats me a hundred percent better!

Hey, i no how u feel. i still love my ex more than my current bf and we have been dating 4 6 months.

Hey, i no how u feel. i still love my ex more than my current bf and we have been dating 4 6 months.

Same things going on with me. My ex bf wuz my best friend and now he hates me and we despise eachother...it sux. good job

(i loved ur poem)

Molly, thanks for the comment!!!!--- Hahahahaha!!!!! I LOVE THIS KID!!! LOVE YA MAGGIE! your my everything!!! omg! that comment!! hahah "yeah you keep laughing" hahaha!!! Dang girl! haha jk but ya i love you times infinity pluse one!
HAHA! much love my maggsy!
XOoX--- i luv u too!! and yeah...he cant just go round saying lmao (cause its got the "a" word in it lol jkjk) but yeah i luv you infinity times 2!! ttyl!! luv ya mollsy bye!!

Awww this is sucha a sad poem! but it's really good!

That was an swesome poem. It reminds me of my life. Keep writing!

The last line's great, a brilliant poem, it's so sad but an excellent read. Keep on writing hun 5/5 x

p.s. thanks for your comment xx

Wow your so good! I really like this one! Its something alot of us can relate too, not in the same way but in someway. It seems like you just poured your feeling onto the page and then turned them into great writting!

Hey i really like this poem the words flow well, thanks for the comment and stuff on my poem

xoxo Sarah

This was a lovely poem i really enjoyed the only thing i would say is that the story was a bit disjointed lik it didnt flow from one stanza to the next but each stanza was good and i liked it all the same a great job :D
xxALLYxx

So she carries on with only memories, they used to be lovers, now they're like enemies

:( so sad and so fantastic.i loved this poem.pls dont tell me u are going through all this :( so sad