Comments : The Final Blow

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Damn... Sorrowful, wonderful write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Ohhh how I miss Chelsey and her writing! This was a good poem missy.

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    How can I fight back though?
    My words are my only weapon
    My shadow is the only one that backs me up
    No one else will step in

    Loved that stanza powerful and captivating choice of words...Im sorry this whole pathetic drama is making you feel so down about everything chelsey I wish there that there was something I could do you know - hopefully my present cheered you up even if only for a second :o)