~*Sad but really great 5/5 im so srry if thats true n hope things work out 4 the best 4 you*~ XoXo
-Crazy

Sad but good..But you made a promise,
To never break my heart,
To never ever hurt me,
But you tore that apart...
my fav part..makes a lot of secne to me as the poem as a whole..i really enojed reading this one...but hope you really dont cut..5/5

Good job hunn...I like your work. 5/5 completely.

I think this one was really good. I think if you wanted to you could have gone really far if you added descriptions but as a whole the poem had a clear message. maybe you can recheck some of the spelling/grammar but other then that I really enjoyed it.

Hotness. You got talent. 5/5

Sad poem, again it showed deep emotion, I can relate to some parts.

Wow this is sad and very deep i loved the rhyming and you did a great job

It was so moving....I liked it! Very well written and the repetition worked a treat. Ace!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Powerful....and a simply amazing poem...i loved the frist two stanzas...I understand this poem...and i loved it...
Emma 5/5

Aww.. .that is really sad and I hope that you don't really feel that way.. and if you do, just remember, everything always works out for the best. You did a great job on this and I hope that you are doing ok!