Wow... im speechless that was very nice.im sorry youre going through something but know you have one friend if not 1,000,000,000 here.plz take care of yourself
much love
jay aka munkey

Awesome, I dont know what to say about it other then its awesome. But it was beautifully written, 5/5

Wow that was an awesome poem ur a really great writer keep it up OMG it was so sad tears came to my eyes I don't know what else to say. Randi Rae

Sniff
aww i am so sorry, poetry is a reli gd way to express loss and that is amazing! i hope u get to have a baby someday.
lots of luv
Nelly xxx

Hey Bec... all I have to say is I totally understand you. I had 4 miscarriages. And everyone of them was harder than the one before, I wont say you will forget, u will never do that, but u will learn to live without the pain... though a part of you will always hurt. I understand you and I really do wish you the best of luck. Just keep strong. Just know he IS watching from above and you dont want him to see you through this pain dont u think? THats what helped me anyways... keep writting... 5/5

::MELI::

Im sorry For your Loss

And i do understand wot ur going froo I lost my babies too

Omg!! I want to cry!! This is soo sad...I wish I could do more than say sorry! Take care hun!!

I really liked how this poem showed just how a girl who has had a miscarriage truly feels. My best friend lost her boyfriend a little over a year ago. the aniversary was about 2 1/2 weeks ago. I wrote a poem for her but it hasnt gotten much of a reponse. not important tho. the poem was written to get my thoughts out i could care less what ppl think about it. help i always take to heart tho. neway i absolutely loved this poem. id love to read more from you. you are a great poet this was very well written. Thats all i had 2 say. sry if i rambled a bit.

Aww this poem is so sad but soo good, i feel for you, and if you ever need to talk im here for you
amazing job writing and keeep it up!
take care,
5/5

holly

Aaawwwww
so sad , but a great poem 5/5

bEyOnDhElP

Wow.. im sorry about what happen.. i know how you feel honestly i had one about a month ago... they arent funn.. great poem.. i felt exactly how you felt

♥ Tracy-Jay

Sad, but very deep. Great write. 5/5

-Taylor

Aww that was very sad and emotional, but a beautiful poem with a beautiful end.. excellent 5/5 xx

I couldnt believe that.. im a 14 year old m. and i had tears in my eyes. its not saying much but that was great thanks for the poem ill look back at it and think howmuch harder it could be.

Awww.. this poem is so sad, i couldnt imagine the pain u wer goin through, its an incredible poem.
xx

Hi this Keyz I love your poem its so good I love how you used

Im sorry I hit the submit button on accident but like I was saying I truely love your poem and it makes you think that she just has a miscarriage but its more to it and more effection in emotion wise. great keep it up!

Omg. I just... can't think of anything to say. This poem is just incredible..

Sorry for the short comment, but i'm speechless.

5/5
~Stephen White

Wow. this is beautiful. great flow. and its so true. i'm so sorry if you had to go through that. 5/5

xo kisses xo

Beautiful poem.
So sad.
Rhyming, word choice were great.
I'm sorry for your loss.
Hope it helped a bit to wrote it down.
You take care