I know how you feel. you write and write then once you read it you say to yourself "what was i thinking?"
but i actually think this is good. i can tell you put your heart into writing it...
very nice.
lauren

Girl! I love this poem I can deff relate to this one...Yea! keep writing...and keep in touch...cuz I think me and you can become best friends cuz we can both relate to our poems...we practically been through the same shit...well i gotta go...write back..

Renee Loves Alex