Very nice poem Luke. Your writing is quite good. Keep up the good work. You will learn a lot from this group, and it will help you to grow as a poet. So far you have overcome the use of Caps At Every Word :P there is still much to learn, and even someone like me is still learning. It's so much fun :)

I agree with Darien - There is always so much to learn! You have started great and your poetry improves with every line... I really like this one, it's very caring and warm. Great work :)

This is sweet.......i love it

if u wnt to talk dont send private message cuz i cant check my email except for every other weekend....sorry...hpe to talk tjo

xoxo
elisas