This is an awesome poem...i feel every word of that poem and can relate majorly...makes me feel like your someone im rather close to to be able to say verse for verse something that i think everytime that i cut..but anyways. good job..comment my poems if u have time. thanks

Om My Gosh! I love this poem, words can't even explain how much I can relate to this poem! 5/5:).. excellent job. and if you could.. please read/ comment my poem switched love(story)

corinne

Ohh my i love this poem, its so sad and awsome
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Well written and do i sence some feeling behind it. Hey don't worry a lot of people go through a point in their lifes where they just want to die but ya know rain before sun :D yea ... n e wayz ... nice poem ... I enjoyed reading it ... cuz it flowed not cuz it was about killing urself ... aight well I'ma shut up now I'm making myself sound sick lol but yea
Hope to read more
~.~ Mia ~.~

U r so good at writting poems hun.. so much better thenme.. u realli express ur feelings i love ya oxx