Awsum.....i thort it was sweet n romantic n a lil funny too....but its very touchin n i enjoyed reading it. keep writing more......
5/5

sonam

Nice poem Kumar.......i enjoyed reading it...5/5

keep writing dear
Bharti

Nice poem Kumar.......i enjoyed reading it...5/5

keep writing dear
Bharti

Wow
5/5 i liked that poem
keep it up XxX

You're a very good writer keep writing and tell me what you think of mine.

The way of translating ur pain through humor is evident .
i can relate to this poem so well , good in poem u chose to leave the foolish girl behind, u are a man of wisdom.

Regards
chavii.

Alright it's pretty good in the first paragraph, but it all goes downhill from there, I don't like it all that much, but the begining is very clever...

Great poem!!!!! i liked it!! it was a good beggining and the whole poem was good... u left a gal who was foolish on your own! :D (i dont know if i said that right..)

~Chocolate Luv~

Lol, it made me laugh! pretty good Kumar, but some of it didnt make sense.. still, it was funny :-)

Funny... i liked it!!!

::MELI::

I so love this one!!!! it's the greatest make more of them peace love and maybe hate nightchick
whoooa heavy metal srry just a force of habit

Haha tha was awsome!
5/5 totally!!

Cool poem

Hahahahahahahahaha i really like your poem & it really feels like i can actuallty see it all happening like you being beaten with a walking stik & a guin being aimed at ur head lol
xoxo
thawless

Haha go boy! Loved it!

Lmao omg im crying in laughter really great work, that was some good stuff, im going to add u to my favorites very well wrtten

Hey ape man nice to know there r apes around hehe jkz jkz :P
nice poem really nice different wayy off writting :) good on u... keep it up

peace outtt