Aw... I really like this poem! It's very sweet! Keep up the good work!

Awwwww it was so cute keep posting and i will keep reading

You definetly have rap ability
i rap too so its kool
great job
this also could of done well in the Slang Poem/love section
great job
5/5
keep it up
~TBOY~

Wow this is like a rap!
this is amazing. i loved every part of it.
5/5
-lauren

AWW THIS POEM IS SO SWEET IT REMINDS ME OF MY POEMS!

I think this poem is pretty good. It could use more or something else. I don't know exactly though.