I can totally realate. I thought it was exellent! Keep it up because you an exellent writer!

Wow. your beautiful words weave a picture of true love. the sweet sorrow of goodbye is purely felt in this decadent piece of poetry.

Sad/Deep and beautifully penned.
Really liked it

all the best and take care

Ey I love this poem. It reminds me of the song why by jason aldean or whatever lol... anyways keep it up
-sandy-

Heidi:
This poem should be sung into a song, because these lyrics are soul-fulfilling and they sing a passionate weave of love. Sing this yourself, and the whole world would be in awe of your powerful writing.

Very nice poem.. umm its not my daughter.. my sister put that on my profile cuz she is a numnut lol and well i may be adopting her or my mom will i dunno lol bye!