Comments : Sweet Revenge

  • 18 years ago

    by Gwen

    Nice, really enjoy your work 5/5 ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by me

    To much anger and i should kno but good poem i think its good for people who want revenge :0

  • 18 years ago

    by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX

    Whoa, hold on little buddy :(
    Well maybe yeah sure :)
    I wouldn't blame u for wanting to kill ur ex :)
    I can't blame myself eaither, after that
    * (excuse me) broke my heart :)
    Great poem :)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I loved this one!
    "Just the desire of getting sweet revenge,
    I will avenge
    my broken heart.
    Can't believe I let you do this to me.
    Don't flipping worry,
    I'm just luring
    you to my revenge."

    I loved that stanza! Keep on writing your really great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Caytii

    Good poem and great way to rhyme it...i give it 5/5! good job!