More tears!!!
another beautiful and captivating poem. I love your use of words, you have an excellent vocab. I can ttly relate to the poem in many ways.
The first letter of each of the first three lines spells TAG! ha!
YOU'RE IT!

Great work of poetry. Nice rhyming scheme.
5/5
~Stevie
(btw: the last line is not a good last line. It needs to leave the reader hanging, but not disappointed...)