Alright...Flow is a little off. I'm going to be honest. Many times I had to go over and read the stanza again because the flow was a little out of order. I like the idea you were trying to get at though. Nice job, keep up the good work.

Great work. I know this feeling well.

Yea good poem... agree with mike... wingless... tho...... flow was a little tricky but other than that good poem... and thought provoking
xoxo

Great job! i agree wit ruthie an wingless..they flow was off but that didnt effect the greatness of it =]...an i see that u took my advice...nicely done....u see how different an nice they look in stazas....great job!

~!Sandra!~

I must say, i agree with you. there is absolutly nothing wrong with sitting in the dark. i do it all the time. :)

I like this poem but its flow is off. I really like it though and there's nothing weird about sitting in the dark. Sometimes darkness is all you have.~red

Great poem...I really love it, I gave it a 5/5...and i understand how you feel
xoxo
~*~brina~*~

Thats a really good poem! i like the darkness jus as long as im not by myself (im scared of the dark) but if im with someone id rather be in the dark.
~*~ not loved ~*~

I love this, and I understand you a lot,
5/5 and your in my favorites now
xoxo
~*~brina~*~