Comments : Hold Your Barrier

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm.. this poem speaks the truth. We are in control of everything, our dreams and fears and hopes. We do need to protect what we must, or more importantly, who we must. Good poem, I enjoyed it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Lovely

    Wow I really liked it. good job 5/5