So sad, but so beautifully written! Awesome job on this poem!

Very well written and effectibve use of vocab

You bring up alot of good points in this poem, the sins and broken heart... finding the wrong way so much easier to take
i also liked the last line of your poem, it was the line that convinced me to comment on this poem
i dont know why but it really "spoke to me" i guess i felt like i could really relate
so overall i think that this is a really good poem, and good job