Very nice piece of work, keep it up.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love. Amit

I can imagine what your going through...comment if u have time =*)

(*sniff*) A very good poem from a very talented writer 5/5
keep up the good work

Hey steven,
this is a really great poem... it describes my life in so many ways. great job!!!

Great poem. you really capture how many feel, including myself about desired love! keep up the good work.