Comments : Heretic

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "Your sick at the site of me" should be "you're" and "sight"

    Yeah I liked this poem, but I think some of the profainity actually took away emotion from the poem, as if it was over-saturated with too much cursing. I really liked the idea that God or religious people sin, and that you are the one that notices and absorbs it.