This is awesome. If it ever becomes a real song, I'll listen to it =] Great job 5/5

luv natz x-x

I like this song a lot. 5/5

-Taylor

Wow. thats some really good, powerful stuff. i know a few ppl like that....it really can tear ppl apart. great expression

I like the word choice.
And just the song all together.
And I dont like much on this site. =/
Well written.

Wow heart breaker.... this is wonderful poem i like it5/5.. i like the way u rwrite great job!

god bless u and takecare