Wow
that was odd , but i realy liked it 5/5

keep it up

bEyOnDhElP

BIG pat on the bak to that gal, every guy who thinks he can treat a gal like shit n still have respect deserves to get his genital area cut off. loved the poem. Thanks for ya comment, dam riught i h8d that chik n i got my revenge last night tee hee.
keep up the good work
Katelyn x x x

Wowon ice....this is interestsing

WAS THE PERSON WHO VOTED KIDDIN OR WHAT?
1.0........U GOTTA BE KIDDIN ME
THOUGH IT IS ODD I REALLY LIKED IT
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK NADIA
KUTTAN

Dat waz a crazy story but it was hot n im neva goin cheat if daz goin happen ta me lol

Wow intense, good work

x0x0

Go girl! lol, you've told a story, and you've told it well! it's definately different and unique, like the rest of your poems.......luv em

Very powerful poem 5/5
read some more of mine

luv caz

Wow.....that was different in a good way...i liked it i guess he learned his lesson huh lol... well keep up da good work
*~*Hannah Tiernan*~*

WOWWWWWW..really mine is like yrs bt the story is diffrnt here..I liked it so muchhhh..ohhh pple make mistakes then they ask u to forgive while they lie
,hurt and deceive..its so sad poem..keep shinin..u deserve
10000000000/5..

Wow that sounds lyk me and my boyfriend, lol, j/m, dat wuz rly harsh, lol, i lyk'd it a lot, it was rly good

Thanks for the comment!
I really like this poem!
I like it a lot!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work!
Cindy

Hey really creep yet awesome. thankx for commenting on my poems. lots of love

hayley

Wow this is good kinda gross but it real good

Gd