Comments : He couldn't take anymore

  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Wow!!! amazing!!!!!! sad but great! u seem to write a lot of sad poems...but they all turn out great!...keep it up

    ~!Sandra!~

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was good. Although it sounded like you were talking about yourself at the beginning, and then you switched it. Hmm.. I'm not sure. It was good though. Keep writing!

    `taleee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww that is so sad.. I loved it. the flow & rhythm was really good. You're an amazing poet, You really have a way of putting emotions in a poem.. I'm definitely adding you to my favorites! Great job on this! I can't wait to read more!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. thats so sadd.. you write such SAD poems! haha.. im not surprised that i dont burst into tears every time i see your name now! lol! keep up the amazing work!
    jessy xox