Wonderful poem, interesting lines

Your poem is awsome so truthful! jus a great write!~valerie

Greayt peice, well written with a good flow. the content is brilliant and consstance thoughout holding the readers interesting and clearly portraying the themes.

5/5

Hey nice poem :)

I really love this. its just perfect content wise. and its written fabulously. nice job

Loved the imagery you created with tis write. This poem was very inspirational to others witha strong message that even through changes good or bad life will always carry on...the past is the past and we must always look towards the future.
Awesome write!

A very interesting and full peom. It liked the ideas and themes behind the poem. You could still do more to make it all the more powerful but all in all a thought-provoking poem...

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