OMG i loved this! it was very good!!..wait no EXCELENT!!!5/5 definately!

Deep p0werful and em0ti0nal. g0od j0b expressing urself. a t0uching p0em.

l0ve always d0ra

Wow, this is a very good poem. Its so deep, Keep up the good work. 5/5

I'm going to be truthful-most of the stanzas were good, some were excellent, and some fell flat. Improve your rhymes

Nice..Nice..Nice...I am astounded. This is what I call poetry..You should become a writer...You'd go far.

Heyyy
that was tough
loved it so much!!!
keep it up
btw u r gr8 ;)

Perfect for lack of a better word. It's so good. I mean the way you used these words is just amazing. I really like this. . . especially the ending. You did real well with this.....it's my favorite so far. Sounds like something i would say or do if i was hurt. Well girl its good and i gave it a 5 but if a 10 was available i would have.
thanks. .
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~*~Amber~*~