This is an awesome poem--you are REALLY good at this ... Keep it up!! Check out my poems when you get a chance.

Cool poem

Cool

You really have a way with words and comparison. I would never have thought of using osmebody in love and making them seem like a thief. I like your descriptions too, so much, that I wish I could find a way to help you imrpove but I can't seem to think of one.

Hmm it ends a bit bluntly
but i love the image of theif

I love the imagery you put into this poem. Good job

This is so originally done and I loved the imagery and the comparisons you used.

Well Done
Sondos

Wow amazing i love it, i love the way you express your self keep it up.5.5

Wow amazing i love it, i love the way you express your self keep it up.5.5

Deep...I like it....
Reminds me of someone.

[lost_laureate-come find me]

It was good, and well written, flowed ok

Short and sweet, great flow, loved it!