Very strong poem, i like it. keep up the good work!
~Sami

Really Good poem!!! hey and tnx 4 comment!kiss

Nice job very job keep it up your poem was very well expressed nice job 5.5

I'll hold myself together, not shatter

That just doesn't sound like it fits to me. Otherwise nice ideas and all.

Ah the lesson i learned. awesome content.

Being you is the best thing you could do. Everyone is unique, lets keep it that way. Nice poem, really well thoughout. Keep on writing!

Not too bad...Not as good as the other two, but every poet has poems like these sometimes. You can always feel emotion in your poem, and even though I didn't like it, I'm going to give it a 5.5 because you could feel the emotion which is always great.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I need you to help me feel like this.
You are my strength.
..xx