Just so everyone who is interested enough in this to comment knows, Beyond This Point Are Monsters are a local band from my area that do a fair few gigs in and around the Derby area and other astranged parts of the nation. Check them out if you're ever fortunate to be close to one of their gigs :)

Wow, great poem, some really good descriptions. 5/5 xx

Nicely done - i like the title - it kind of urges the reader to get into the skin of the poem.

you might want to check the punctuation - the site substitutes some strange stuff for full stops!

will come back to read more

good luck and peace
shobhana

Another compelling read, Chris. You're really distilled a brooding topic into a few poignant words with this one.

HI! How come you stopped writing?? Please write - your talent shouldn't be kept in the dark.

peace
shobhana