Hey hunn,
very touching, seriously, i like it when people write about people they know like that. it,s crazy how everyone just has something like that. something thye try to hide or something they just dont talk about...anyway I have to my bus will get here, beautiful luv ya-xxx-

Ahh baby,
This is an amazing one, xx; you do know how much I love you write.... Right, so any time you have to talk to someone, I'm always a listening ear ready to listen and hear. I was touched! tear tear.

This is a great poem!!! It's like a riddle! lol It's so hard to solve all of it though!!! lol I love it so much!
:D je t'aime, xxxx ~Meg

Woho. This is a wonderful and powerful poem. I expected it to be good, but I still got overwhelmed.

Very well done sweety. I loved every part of it, and every word.

Very sad. Touched me. It really did.

Love ya!
-xxx-

Wow thats a great poems.. n i love how each paragraph is about someone else.n you put them together like that.. its was truley a great poem i loved reading it even tho it was SUPER sad. :( but you did a great job...
keep it up ...

This is a great poem, but sad cause it all so true in many kids lives today..........XJ

I really enjoyed it! The idea about making each paragraph about a different friend or person was amazing. Great job!!!