Hey,

Awesome poem! You're first to lines paint a beatiful picture. Lol I cannot wait to hear more from you! lol, My names Jenn, I'm the head of fish bowl, Umm There will be ba bit of dealy until we accept your application because I need to run a few things by our assistants but I'd like to welcome you as our first member yay!! =) *is very excited* lol

Jenn
Sorry if this seems really odd =S

Wow.... I should be ashamed of myself...look at all those friggen typos! 0_o I'm so sorry > _ < ' Bleh

Hey there,
:(aww honey, this was a sad, but beautifully written poem. I like how you repeated teh third stannza again as the last one.
Monique

I feel like that too when i watch the snow fall at night, it's breathtaking! amazing poem!! it recreated that emotion perfectly (although i know that it wasnt the main subject of the poem lol)... welcome to the club!! hope you enjoy :D
-xXx-

"If I could
I would run so far
To the depths of the remote
Till I dont remember who you are"
^^i just had to show you my awe at those lines. They worked brilliantly together and has such a strong impact.
Very well done i like this poem very much.
I cant believe i haven't welcomed you yet..shame on me!!
WELCOME to the FISHBOWL..it's gonna be the maddest club ever made:P Of course with jenn as the head:P
Anyway..enjoy and keep writing.
>torn x x x