Comments : No one knows...who I really am

  • 18 years ago

    by courtney

    Hey that was great. i think thats how i feel sometimes. like no one knows the real me, the person inside of me that wants to come out but i dont let it. thats cool how we relate.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    WOW!!! this one was excellent i loved it...good job n kep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sharon

    I really like this poem especially since I can relate to it. Good Job

  • 18 years ago

    by hiding behind a smile

    I really like ur poem and i would like to thank u for commenting on mine
    stephie

  • Hey I like this poem!! Well done!! And thnx for the comment on mine!!

  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    This is a rly gr8 poem. it shows lots of feeling. uv got talent! keep writing!
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by .+*Jess*+.

    Really good, i know how you feel 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    Hey thats a great poem. i loved it. great writing keep it up.
    much love
    ashley

  • Once again i can relate... a very good poem! 5
    xX velvet kisses Xx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Angel Lloyd Rose

    Well, alot of people may not understand you you really are, but been there and done that, to say the least. you are definately on my favorites list. talk to you later. well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Passionatevoice

    I can totally relate to that! really good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Zach Armitage

    Deep. captures the secrecy of the persona well. the line length is good, starting long, shortening then lengthening again adds to the idea of concealment. though the line 'keeping everything hidden in the inside.' might work better without the 'in the' at the end. jus a thought im probably wrong.
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by kkmac4

    Oooo I liked this one! It was good and i can relate. nice job buddy :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Mark

    I can relate to this poem.. I think it was great.. but in the same way, depressing.

    Well done :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Moose

    Very dark, Very sad, usually very true. Wish life wasnt as hard as it truly is.

    My hopes and dreams are all gone
    but is this what I wanted all along?
    then I realize that i cry
    and my eyes
    they are full of tears
    but theres no one to hear.

    Know exactly how that feels. and that part of the poem is what made me give you 5/5. Great Job.

    Yours Truly
    Bryce

  • 17 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Wow. I really loved the poem 5/5
    XxXNothing-Gold-Can-StayXxX

  • 17 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    Very deep! Alot of people can relate to it. I like how you varied your rhyme sequences. It was a great read. Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tortured Soul

    I love this poem. it's exactly how i feel. great job! please keep it up! and thanks for the comment on mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by StarlessNight

    Wow that was really good. It gave me the sivers. It was like you read into my soul. I loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by theking

    This is a good poem