Wonderfully written...sumtieme we do wish we coudl rewrite things but we can't...keep it up.

Thanks for commenting on my poem. ^.^

I like this poem. The second verse threw me off a little, but besides that the flow and everything is great. I love the way you compare your past to a story you can rewrite into a 'fairytale', it keeps the reader interested and gets them thinking.

Thanks for adding a great poem to the world. I had a longer comment, but I hit a bad botton.